Friday, September 2, 2016
The sunset
As the glowing sun begins to shine and the horizon starts to brighten I can see the sea smashing on the rocks slowly and carefully. I hear the noisy waves and I smell the night time air. The gentle wind and the calming sea clears your mind. The annoying sand magically sticks to the ice cream I try and eat. The sea breeze and the crashing waves are nice when you are sick as it clears your mind. You can taste the salty air but it makes your mouth dry. Sometimes I think the beach is amazing and fun.
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This is a wonderful piece of writing Nikita. I really like how you have used the 5 senses to describe the sunset.
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